Wednesday, 31 May 2017

My new car shoe car.jpg            I just bought my first car.  It’s very fast   and  it was only $10,000 dollars. It’s really  huge and i love it very much because it has a lot of room   .  It’s an awesome car . but it’s incredibly hard   to drive  Because it has a mini  steering wheel .It looks really funny.
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           !!  The biggest  crocodile !!                                     The nasty wide crocodile collapsed ‘ it ate a very poisonous orange. It was a  fat ‘ old crocodile  that  was going to die anyway .It’s not sad because  it was a  very evil crocodile. It was the biggest crocodile in the world . I think that it’s  awesome  because he was the biggest crocodile to ever live .  Happily he lived with awesome crocodiles and those crocodiles were his best mates .  His friends would always help him .
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                                                   100 word story
                                                                                             Once there was a kid who ate something so  disgusting that he spewed it out and you know what he  said.he said I just couldn't eat something so disgusting in my life. It was a biscuit  that had salt on  . That is disgusting  as hell how could someone even eat something that gross .why would someone even  eat that when it looks so   disgusting because it has maggots in it . now i know why he spewed it out .I would never eat something that disgusting.then the boy lived happily ever after and it didn't happen again. by callum

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

by callum
We wrote 6 word stories about bugs today .These are my favourite ones.
                        






 ‘’I have a really funny face’’

       ‘’Why am I standing on berries?”

              “ Hey, look what  I can do”


                         “Hey, that's mine.Give it back.

                            “Man, this is hard to push”
‘’Man, that was a funny joke.’’

Tuesday, 21 March 2017

Survivor  day
At night time in the hall the crowd was roaring while the people on the stage were planting their faces in bowls of flour, trying to find a small little wine gum.                      
Then there was one activity where you had to carefully get M&Ms out of  a bowl .That looked like fun but it  was hard as to do, because you would  have to be good at it.    There also  was one where you had to 20170302_200949.jpg eat weetbix without milk or sugar yuck. by callum

Thursday, 16 March 2017

Inside my  head
am a all black swerving and fending as i boll someone  over and then i score the winning try then the crowd goes wild  inside my head.   
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           inside my head  i'm doing  a triple backflip  then a three sixty  on a bike  then i fail and get back up again  inside my head.    


                                  Inside my head i'm doing     wheelies  on my dirt bike  and flinging mud at my house while my mom is fainting  because the yard is all torn up . by callum