Sunday, 3 September 2017

my speech writting

ANIMALS SHOULD BE KEPT in ZOOS                            

Many animals such as the grizzly bear, the dodo, and the black rhino are near extinction and other endangered animals are too.There are murderers everywhere trying to kill the harmless animals. Zoos save the poor animals so then they will be safe in zoos habitats and they'll live longer. Then no one can harm them.                                        
                                                               
Animals  in zoos  get fed a lot more food than they would  in the wild  .They would die while they're trying   to get food for their babies and thierself.   That doesn't happen in  in zoos . Zoos feed animals there favorite food like a lion would get feed a bit of raw steak or lamb  and birds would get feed bird food . It's better for the animals to get feed heaps more food .                                                       
                                                              

Heaps of animals are getting killed by hunters because some animals like rhinos  get killed for their horns   because their   worth a lot of money .Even if they are doesn't mean people should kill them. If they’re in zoos that won't happen to them. In zoos animals have  habitats made for that kind of animal.                      
Recently I saw a harmless giraffe, shot dead and  just left  to rot away  which is really sad. Why would someone do something like that? It's so sad to see dead animals like harmless beautiful giraffes  just left there to rot away
Why would you do such a thing to the harmless animals because they weren't doing anything wrong  to anyone sow why should people kill the harmless wild animals for no reason which is so stupid .    

                            
But not all animals  should be kept in zoos  because some animals are pets like ,pet fishes,dogs,cats and horses and turtles they shouldn't be kept in zoos oversley   because there pets .But wild animals should be kept in zoos because there wild animals and they're not pets.   

             
So in conclusion, zoos are good for animals, they protect and stop hunters from
killing harmless animals.   

Wednesday, 31 May 2017

My new car shoe car.jpg            I just bought my first car.  It’s very fast   and  it was only $10,000 dollars. It’s really  huge and i love it very much because it has a lot of room   .  It’s an awesome car . but it’s incredibly hard   to drive  Because it has a mini  steering wheel .It looks really funny.
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           !!  The biggest  crocodile !!                                     The nasty wide crocodile collapsed ‘ it ate a very poisonous orange. It was a  fat ‘ old crocodile  that  was going to die anyway .It’s not sad because  it was a  very evil crocodile. It was the biggest crocodile in the world . I think that it’s  awesome  because he was the biggest crocodile to ever live .  Happily he lived with awesome crocodiles and those crocodiles were his best mates .  His friends would always help him .
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                                                                                             Once there was a kid who ate something so  disgusting that he spewed it out and you know what he  said.he said I just couldn't eat something so disgusting in my life. It was a biscuit  that had salt on  . That is disgusting  as hell how could someone even eat something that gross .why would someone even  eat that when it looks so   disgusting because it has maggots in it . now i know why he spewed it out .I would never eat something that disgusting.then the boy lived happily ever after and it didn't happen again. by callum